Friday, 23 August 2019

Critique: Life of Pi (Yann Martel) 2/2


***SPOILERS***

Miscellaneous Comments

To see the author execute long lists correctly was very much appreciated and refreshing. Colons (: ) are used to start a long list of phrases and uses semi-colons (; ) are used to separate the phrases.

Whilst fishing, Pi makes an excellent observation: ‘“Why can we throw a question further than we can pull in the answer?”’ That one really hits home. Humans keep on asking, and keep on trying to find answers to, questions that we can never truly answer in an objective way. As a philosopher, I’m one of many who still question things humans asked over three thousand years ago.

Pi was full of other sentences that made me pause and thing. He praised that he had a good cat (Richard Parker), a good ark (the lifeboat) and good ears that heard him (the sky). But then he instantly threw this is doubt, declaring these same things as a danger, a jail and as not listening. Considering how frightening his situation was, I’m not shocked that he couldn’t convince himself.

There was one part in the novel that was tedious and boring but it’s insightful and definitely adds something to the story. For two pages, Pi recounts the instructions and ration lists that came with the life boat. Pi has a remarkable memory, like knowing all the digits of mathematical pi, so this is another demonstration of that. Plus he did have little to do on the boat: it’s hardly surprising that he would focus and obsess over what he did possess.

Pi makes a big deal about having a fierce will to live whereas most people let go easily. This is far from the truth. People are scared to die, people often avoid activities that can cause death, people abhor murderers, and fearing death is a great motivator for coercing individuals. People hold on to life as long as they can and refuse to die (if it’s an option). There’s no denying that Pi has a fierce will to live but there is denying that Pi is in a minority. Perhaps Pi doesn’t understand people or more likely he wanted to give himself strength. One sentence encapsulates how people behave: ‘[i]t may be nothing more than life-hungry stupidity.’

‘Life of Pi’ is, unsurprisingly, told from Pi’s perspective. There are two instances of a journalist’s viewpoint, however. In the first instance, this perspective isn’t separated from Pi’s view other than with italics; it’s a paragraph with the shift button rather than a line free of text. This felt very out of place, although if these interjections happened regularly rather than only once, this shoehorned into Pi’s perspective would have been fine. The second instance is cornered off from Pi’s viewpoint and gives a very detailed description of a Hindu shrine. In both of the journalist’s perspectives, lovely imagery was utilised finely.


Questioning and Conclusion

In Chapter 94, Pi reveals that he likes things to end properly. He felt like his relationship with Richard Parker didn’t end right (who fled into the rainforest). If you spend such extended and intimate time with only one person, can the end of that relationship ever be proper, to have complete closure? A less serious example is that a book should have one hundred chapters. As far as Pi was aware, the retelling of his story to the journalist only reached ninety-five chapters.


From Chapter 96 onwards, the reader gets transcripts from Japanese government officials interviewing Pi about the sunken ship.
Interviewing Pi whilst he was still a child, the officials weren’t expected Pi’s adult and insightful comments. One such example is when Pi tells them ‘don’t bully me with your politeness.’ This got me thinking about politeness and its negative utilities, something I’d never considered before.
We don’t see them for long but they were entertaining characters. At one point, they’re laughing and, between chuckles, Mr. Chib complains that it’s not funny but Mr. Okamato tells him to keep laughing. That tickled me into stitches.
At another point, they offer Pi a cookie and after Pi makes a fuss over it the official says ‘it’s only a cookie.’ Considering how much Pi worried over food whilst he was shipwrecked (and considering how stupidly grateful I get over food), I’m not surprised that Pi put more value on the cookie than the official did.
Misters Chib and Okamato kept on challenging Pi’s account but the new story Pi gave them is full of plot holes that they should have tried to fill in (but I suppose after challenging P’s perspective they may have just wanted to leave). In it, a strong man did nothing other than focus on his survival, even killing Pi’s mum for food. Next time they went hungry, the strong man did kill the weak Pi, even though he was an easy food source and having one less mouth to feed would have increased his own survival. Then the strong man let Pi kill him even though he’d been focusing on his own survival throughout. For me, this was Pi making up a story on the spot.
Yet at the end of the report, the Japanese officials note that Pi is the only castaway to survive ‘in the presence of an adult Bengal tiger.’ I thought this was a lovely ending, as was the fact that the novel’s last chapter was Chapter 100. It’s a shame Pi never knew.


When I first read ‘Life of Pi’, I never thought to query Pi’s account. It’s a fictional story so one allows for creative license and the fantastical elements are my literature bread and butter.
Multiple times Pi shows a phenomenal memory so it leads the reader into not questioning him. But after I told a friend that I’d finished reading it, she said how amazing it was that Pi’s mind created so many hallucinations. So I read it again a few years later and I can see the evidence of this.
The hyena was described as having mouselike eyes: maybe this was because it was actually a mouse/other rodent, and their tiny size would have made it easier for it to hide from Pi on the lifeboat.
It was bizarre, reading a story with two consecutive story lines about the very same thing. This gave me huge appreciation for Yann Martel’s writing abilities. This is why this is a book I recommend to everyone no matter their preferred genres. Good writing can be appreciated whether you personally like it or not.




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