Friday, 6 September 2019

Critique: The Sons of Thestian (The Hermatia Cycle Book One) (M.E. Vaughan) 1/2

***SPOILERS***

The story follows Jionat and Rufus as they build friendship and trust with each other and Fae as they encounter magic whilst escaping political intrigue. This novel draws heavily from Celtic mythology for its creatures and themes.  Jionathan is a Prince of Hermatia, son of King Thestian and his second wife Lady Eliane of the Delphi ‘cursed’ with sensations and the sight. Rufus is a magi, someone who channels the powers of the gods to perform magic; his last name is ‘Merle’, a nice reference to the great magician Merlin. This is especially appropriate because Rufus is hilarious and Merlin in myths is often described as a joker.
                                                            

Some Notes

Perhaps the most striking feature of this book is the plethora of beautiful, vivid descriptions. From the first two pages the audience is gifted with ‘darkness feasted’ and ‘shadows snapping at their heels’. These are consistent throughout the novel (unlike other works in which description peters out as the action strides in). Indeed, I could fill pages and pages with such quotations. I will limit myself to one more. Instead of stating the city was as familiar as the back of his hand, Rufus said it was ‘as familiar as his bedroom’ which was a pleasant, creative way to shake up the cliché.


Here are some miscellaneous topics.
There was one concept that jumped out at me. Not because it was inventive but because it happened in my own life. Rufus mentions his mother told him to draw nightmares in order to make them stop. My mother told me the same thing and I have never met anyone else who did this, so to see it in a book caught me off guard.
Rufus has an amazing relation with his father Torrin, full of familiarity, teasing and honesty (even if Rufus is not immediately forthcoming). It was a bit odd, though, because Torrin switched between formal and informal speech patterns. Usually when people adopt a more formal or informal pattern than normal, it’s for a specific and instantly recognisable reason. Torrin’s switching was without cause.
Zachery leads the Night Patrol, made of magi who transform into monsters to enforce the capital’s nightly curfew. The main reason, however, seemed be to keep Jionat from fleeing the city. We also get a few sections from Zachery’s perspective. In one of them, he makes a continual fuss about covering his nakedness from his housekeeper Heather. Yet simultaneous, he makes a fuss that he has nothing to hide from her and that she’s seen everything. It made me want to shout “Pick one!” at Zachery.



Faeries

When Jionat finally flees the city into the forest, he saves Fae from a team of bandits led by Bruatar. By the time Rufus catches up, the boys decide to continue Fae’s mission of retrieving Princess Aurora of Bethean.
            Fae is a Cat Sidhe, a kind of faerie. Yes, a faerie called Fae: so original. (It hurts to not spell it like ‘fairy’ but ‘faerie’ isn’t incorrect. I’ll just have a small strop by myself.) Anyway, in the Hermantia Cycle, a Cat Sidhe is a faerie with an elven/humanoid form and can shape shift into a horse-sized black cat with wings. This expands upon Celtic mythology in which a cat sidhe is just a black cat. A nice touch is that the white chest-patch cat sidhe have in mythology is also in Hermantia.
            Fae has been tasked to save Aurora from Embarr, a gancanagh. This type of faerie manipulates lust in order to drain victims of energy, sometimes resulting in death. Bearing in mind Aurora is a young teenager and Embarr is much older, the whole lust thing is awfully grim.
The trio meet Embarr just after Fae debriefs the boys on the manipulation. Jionat announces this feeling between men s ‘unnatural’ and he finds the experience highly uncomfortable. Rufus, on the other hand, seem very satisfied. Jionat even wants to break Embarr’s bones and Rufus says ‘”I’ll gladly hold him down.”’ (Did I start choking on my cuppa because I snorted at this? Yes, yes I did.)
Embarr reveals the korrigans (faerie priestesses of Morrigan) stole the princess. The trio go in to rescue Aurora and, as they descend into the korrigan’s submerged home, both the korrigans and readers remain ignorant of the true plan. One initially reads it as a betrayal but finding out this was a ruse made for a fantastic read. Plus you get heady stuff when Rufus sees the korrigan’s preparing a spell to cheat death and Rufus was impressed, if not disturbed, to see a viable immortality spell.
Jionat, meanwhile fights a red cap. In both the novel and mythology, red caps survive by soaking their hat in blood: if the blood dries, the red cap dies. I just wonder how the red cap would have enough fresh blood in the tunnels. The protagonists make very clear that people very rarely come near the tunnels, let alone go in. So does the red cap get blood from the korrigans? Are there any animals living in the cave that are a substitute for human blood?
I have one more comment for this section. They sit at a campfire to discuss the plan, and the prose states Rufus sits back down. Yet last we heard, he’d been crouching at the fire. At no point did it mention he’d stood up. It was an unseemly transition.



Sarrin Town

When the characters go to Sarrin in Bethean, they stay with Rufus’ cousins and uncle Michael. We see a heart-wrenching scene from Rufus’ past and the author captured the grief with such excellence. This family is also very formal in speech yet informal in content.
Sarrin does wonders for the relations between the three protagonists. They open up their hearts, thoughts and trust to each other. I think that the rekindling of Jionat’s closeness with Rufus was handled very well because they’ve both ‘found’ the other. Seeing new strong friendship grow is a privilege, whether real or fictional. They even make jokes that a few days before would have crossed the line.
Bruatar comes to Sarrin to capture Fae, Rufus shares a tender moment with her, saying ‘”I kicked him in the face, if that helps.’” That’s probably the most intimate and funny piece of violence I’ve ever seen.
When Luca (Rufus’ cousin) tells the townsfolk to leave to avoid bandits, they comply straight away. Realistically, it doesn’t matter how much is trusted or respected you are: people always protest about leaving their homes. Even if people know a hurricane/earthquake is coming or they can see a raging fire, they struggle to leave. (Apparently all the people in this world are easily persuadable. This is neither the first nor last time that persuasion is instantly accepted.)


Jionat is astounded to see a lesbian wedding. He comes around to acceptance (thankfully) but he did so a bit too quickly, especially considering how much he was against the idea before. One protest (to my amusement and exasperation) was that ‘but then you can marry your dog’ which was bizarre. There’re massive differences between a human marrying another human compared to a human marrying a dog. One can’t have children with dogs and pet-owner relationships are a completely dynamic to a romantic relationship between two individuals with sentience. So Jionat’s protest seems absurd. Maybe this is a common protest in the real world? That thought worries me. It just seems like it was shoehorned into the story.




Reviews: The Hermatia Cycle (M. E. Vaughan)

The Sons of Thestian (Book One) 2/2

The Blood of the Delphi (Book Two) 1/2

The Blood of the Delphi (Book Two) 2/2
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