Monday, 4 September 2017

Critique: Winds of Fate (Mercedes Lackey)

Book One of the Mage Winds, a Valdemar Omnibus.

***SPOILERS***

The shield protecting Valdemar from the effects (and memories) of magic was failing. This prompted Elspeth, Crown Princess and a Herald of Valdemar, to find a sorcerer to teach her people magic and help them fight the hostile neighbouring country of Hardorn.
Meanwhile, the book also explores Darkwind, a scout of a Talyedras clan (people who heal land poisoned by negative magic) who protects his clan and Vale (tropical hothouse containing their homes) against the dark mage Mornelithe Falconsbane. The Heartstone (which powers and protects the Vale) of Darkwind’s clan has been corrupted which inhibits their ability to find the rest of the clan which has been transported away (once an area of land is free of negative energy, the clan moves on to a new location) which is why Darkwind had forsaken magic.
Elspeth is escorted by her best friend Skiff who develops romantic feelings for Elspeth though, thankfully, Elspeth didn’t reciprocate those feelings (I absolutely hate it when best friends end up as a couple). Elspeth has this huge issue with the Companions sweeping her off in a direction that she had no say in, so she chooses her own way. Elspeth ends up meeting Darkwind who decides to take up magic again and teach Elspeth who (unsurprisingly) had the potential to become a very powerful mage.

Lackey is such a funny writer. I can’t count how many times I cackled. Fantasy tends to be more formal and serious than realistic genres (thus establishing efficient suspension of belief) so the fact that Lackey can write with humour whilst maintaining the suspension of belief is admirable. Elspeth’s Companion (white ‘horses’ which are the moral compasses to Heralds, the police and judges of Valdemar) is a very funny character. I wished we got more of Gwena but as she is subsidiary to the plot so I don’t begrudge Lackey’s decision. It’s not just her characters that are funny but her prose as well.

I loved the Talyedras (commonly known as ‘Hawkbrothers’).
I loved that they were artsy and had no restrictions on sexual behaviour. I loved the Vales they lived in, surrounded by beautiful plants and hot springs. I loved Vree, Darkwind’s bond bird (magically enhance birds with the ability of limited speech that can be of many species, from owls to firebirds to hawks to falcons to crows) and the bond between them. They made a perfect team and it was a shame the Vree-Darkwind interactions lessened over this series and their conversations was basically non-existent in other series, even when Darkwind was the viewpoint character.
Shin’a’in clans are the cousins to the Talyedras. One of the Shin’a’in clans is the Clan of the Hawk. The official explanation for Talyedras being known as ‘Hawkbrothers’ was because of their close association with their bondbirds, but could this name also be a sign that they are brothers to the Hawk Shin’a’in clan and thus by extension all other Shin’a’in? This sort of ambiguity is often found in Lackey’s work, giving readers something to think about and make connections.
When Elspeth first finds Darkwind, the Talyedras is with the griffins Treyvan and Hydona. Darkwind tells Elspeth that she is in the presence of two mages: Treyvan makes a big deal about this, being surprised Darkwind has finally decided to be a mage again. Darkwind confirms this. But both griffins are also mages (a fact that Darkwind knew) so Elspeth was in the presence of three mages. This was a preventable mistake.

Just some general notes.
When following every character, the readers see them think through multiple scenarios or reasons before taking action. It’s fantastic to see such deep thinking. Obviously they all inhabit roles that require intelligence but equally it would have been nice for each character to have different levels of intelligence.
Magic is interesting in Valdemar. It bleaches everything which is why Talydras have white hair and their bondbirds turn white. The Companions are white because they too are bleached by magic. The land contains energy flows of magic (lay lines and such) from which all magic is drawn. If a mage draws magic from the surrounding area, other mages of that area can also feel it. Falconsbane performed many feats of magic that the Hawkbrothers should have been able to sense, yet they realise that he’s being using energy from Nyara (his daughter/concubine), another mage, meaning local energy flows aren’t disturbed. The general conception of magic is that is behaves like water.
When Elspeth and Skiff enter Rethwellen, the resident they visit says that Elspeth studied the Rethwellen as evidenced by her ‘lack of accent.’ Basic linguistic fact: everyone speaks with an accent. If you speak, it is with an accent. You can’t lack an accent when you speak. This is the result of people confusing the standard variation of the language as being the only ‘correct’ way to pronounce a word with all other variations being accents. Just nope. When teaching non-natives speakers a language, you can only teach them one of the many accents of a language, and it makes sense to teach all non-natives to speak in this one way for convenience. This standard variety ends up being the accents of the well-to-dos in the country’s capital. But this doesn’t make the standard variety ‘right’ or a non-accent. A Londoner and someone from Yorkshire speak very differently; Standard French is very different from the French spoken in Brittany.

One sentence that stood out for me was ‘If this is a trial of my abilities, the gods have no sense of proportion.’ I found that interesting to ponder. The characters’ intellect and the system of magic were also interesting.



Reviews: Mage Winds Omnibus (Mercedes Lackey)


Winds of Change (Book Two)

Winds of Fury (Book Three)


Review: Mage Storms Omnibus (Mercedes Lackey)

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