Wednesday, 28 June 2017

Critique: Last Battle of the Icemark (Stuart Hill)

***SPOILERS***

Not long after the second book, the Icemark has to do battle with the Dark Realms and the Artimision, Hypolitans of the South. It was fun and sufficiently dramatic for the closing book in a trilogy. My main criticism of the last book was about how not keeping a mystery alove (especially one central to the plot) curtailed suspicion of belief. Throughout this book, the reader is consistently reminded that Oskan has a secret weapon, keeping the mystery alive and thus justifying its existence. Plus Oskan, my favourite human character, got back his personality of humour and grins, even despite stress. That was great.


There were several things that were done really well. Artemision (the warring nation) is a clear reference to Artemis, a Greek goddess of war. Adronicus (‘andro’ as in ‘male’), one of the generals, is fighting the female warriors. The Emperor was very sweet, his meeting with Thirrin was moving, and the pairing of Cressida and Leonidas is wonderfully adorable. A personal favourite feature of mine was Medea’s ‘chair-that-was-almost-a-throne’.


There were also several things that were stupid mistakes. There is no beating around the bush with any of these.
First. Sharley looks for snow leopard footprints even though moments before it is stated that snow leopards don’t leave footprints. How did this get pass editorial? How did this even get written? It was too stupid to be irritated by.
            Second. The Vampire Queen bemoans the long centuries she will have to rule alone. Then straight after she states that time has no relevance to her. Well, clearly it does. If maybe time had no relevance for her until she had to rule long centuries alone, then this would have been great. But these two statements weren’t linked, directly or in the subtext.
Third. I found Medea’s hatred to be unrealistic. The excuse of ‘she was a hormonal teenager’ just doesn’t justify the scale of her feelings. It seemed more like a caricature than an actual personality. And whilst she was in the realm of evil, it didn’t appear to inflate any emotion (bar insanity, which wasn’t what Medea displayed) of any other individual, so why her?
And the fact that she, an injured 15 year-old, survived the evil realm when adults didn’t is farfetched. Yes, she managed to cloud the senses of the most powerful warlock ever (Oskan) in the last book, but this very same warlock injured her. Perhaps she was strong enough to survive but the injury and young age gave her the side-effect of inflated hatred? This still doesn’t persuade me, though.


Now I want to talk religion.
            The Icemark connection to nature and magic validates a Pagan comparison. The faith of the Mekhmet’s Desert Kingdom is monotheistic and seems, in form, content and context, to be inspired by Islam. Finally you have the mythology of the Icemark (which is portrayed as historical events) in which Valkyrie-like figures take dead warriors to Valhalla (Nordic beliefs, anyone?) and there is an on-going battle between good and evil after a cosmic war between angels and demons (Christian/general Abrahamic influences). The leader of good is the Goddess who the good witches/warlocks in particular worship (tying it back in with Paganism).
The book opens with the celebration of Samhain, mentioning that older people called it Halloween. On the one hand, Halloween was the Christian name for the Pagan festival of Samhain, so it would make sense if the older people called the festival Samhain and the newer Halloween. On the other hand, this could be a nod to the real world, reflecting that people have called the festival Halloween for so many years now and it’s only relevantly recently that witches have called the festival Samhain. So either the author is ignorant or well-aware of the history of the festival’s name.
After the cosmic battle, the Goddess offered her loving forgiveness to those who opposed her. But then why did the Goddess throw these ones out? The book made clear that they were thrown out as much on purpose as those that scorned it. Why offer forgiveness if you won’t grant it. The book never dealt with this issue and left me wondering.


Overall, this book (and the trilogy) was great fun. The blend of religions into a harmonious whole was well done. The plots and characters were interesting. There was a good amount of description. It was fantastic to have magic and animals talking. Werewolves that weren’t evil and didn’t lose control or transform was done well, characterising a well-loved myth in a different light as a nation of rational people. Yet whilst I have found a lot to criticise, it didn’t take away from me enjoying a fantasy world positively.




Reviews: The Icemark (Stuart Hill)


The Cry of the Icemark (Book One)

Blade of Fire (Book Two)

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